Monday, October 15, 2012

The fawn

Author's note: This piece is about  Cause/Effect in the story The Fawn. I wrote this to demonstrate my understanding of Cause/Effect.


Every morning, I go to the top of the hill to go on the bus  However, one morning when I was getting on the bus, I saw a fawn.  It still had some of its spots so it was very young.  I wondered why a fawn was alone since I didn't see any other deer.   

When I came home from school I saw a dead deer near my house. It looked like it had been hit by a car going too fast.  I realized that the dead deer must be the fawn’s mother. I felt sad for the fawn, hoping that it is strong enough to survive the winter. This is why cars should go slow so the wildlife in Wisconsin don’t get killed.

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